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I too love the dream like quality of this, and fell in love with it the moment I saw it! My only concern is with the ship, as mentioned previously... the ship's reflection is too sharp and does not seem to follow the same dreamlike theme... the girl is also slightly faint which just makes the ships reflection stand out more... I do love this and hope I helped! Overall... gorgeous work sweetie! -- "Wicked is what evil tastes like!" Ana-Lyn~~ "Let them call me a rebel, and welcome; I feel no concern from it. For I should suffer the misery of devils, were I to make a whore of my soul." Thomas Paine  Thank you. Yes, looking at it now i see that the ship's reflection jars slightly...and over the enxt week i will look into fixing it. Thank you for the comments and compliments.
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I specailly love the colors. The way you manage to play with them, create such a soft piece full of serenity... And it's not only the colors. It is also the textures.. textures on the sand.. on the sky.. those horizontal lines crossing on image here and there. And to be honest, I think it is a very clever trick as those lines add so much depth to the image. I really love that turn.
The sky is beautiful. I love the big emptiness on the image. You have only few details: model, ship.. the mountains and hardly visible paper on the wind.. but those few and standalone elements great such a amazing atmosphere, they contribute to this image in way I cannot describe.
The work with light has been brilliant.
And on the message.. I just look at it.. and.. It starts to speak with me. I can have thousand of ideas on my head what this image represents.. it leaves me, in some way, speechless.
The only thing I think I can be little harsh is the technique. I love how the model seems to be not connected with the image.. I mean.. like she is ghost, little transparent, no reflection or shadow.. but that ship.. at it's reflection. It seems little out of the place.
But overall: I most say. Amazing piece, really refreshing and amazingly done.
If I were to change annything, it would be the reflection of the ship in the water. It reflects clear to the sand, which it shouldn't considering how far away it is from the girl in the front. I probably would have also put it on an angle rather than up and down, and maybe shrank it or blended away part of it so that the shadow is relevant to that portion of the picture.
That's pretty much the only aspect of the image that could be worked on a bit. Everything else is really nice.
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